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The feeling

November 22, 2008
By Miss.Bliss1 BRONZE, Scotsburn, Other
Miss.Bliss1 BRONZE, Scotsburn, Other
3 articles 5 photos 46 comments

I€™m on first! Oh no.
Am I going to forget my lines when I get up there?

Ok looks like it’s time for me to go up. Running lines in my head as I walk up onto the stage. Is my acting partner nervous? He sure looks nervous from here.

I look up at him as I’m saying my lines..OW! Thows limelights are hot!
”THERES NO PIANO THERE” I shout at my partner.
The audience laughs. That’s good that means they like the play.

All of a sudden it’s over. And I feel like a great weight has bin lifted off
of my shoulder. The audience applauds.

YES! They did like us!
We were a hit!

People that I know and people that I don’t know come up to congratulate my acting partner and I.
Other actors who were in other plays tonight come up to me and pat me on the back. Some even give me a hug.
An audience member comes up to me and tells me to keep acting.

Then I’m in my car and away I go back home.
But never forgetting the incredible feeling of success and accomplishment.

The author's comments:
I have published here before. I love to write. You could say it's one of my passions in life. This is a true poem. It really happend. This was my first big play. And I think I'm going to keep acting.

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This article has 5 comments.

Joman said...
on Dec. 3 2008 at 11:50 pm
Very nice, emo! Like I said before, it's awesome!!!! :D

on Dec. 2 2008 at 10:26 pm
Wonderful poem. I really liked this one a lot!

I can really get a feeling for the experience.

The auther said...
on Dec. 2 2008 at 8:04 pm
Hi, guys. I wrote this poem. Thank you for your comments. Go tell some more pepole about this poem for me! The more comments and star rateings I get the better.

Golden said...
on Dec. 1 2008 at 10:10 pm
Yes, your partner was nervous, I'm glad the experience was powerful, there is nothing which compares to the performing arts....good for you!

R.C.A said...
on Dec. 1 2008 at 8:46 pm
Awesome work yet again! Heartfelt and real.