Dream | Teen Ink

Dream

June 27, 2013
By chronosun BRONZE, Movingsomewherenew, Illinois
chronosun BRONZE, Movingsomewherenew, Illinois
3 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Night after night,
Every time I fall asleep,
I dream, waves of dreams upon endless dreams,
The sights I see are of people wandering by me,
Their eyes slightly peeking but their mouths seldom speaking,
They wander but only now do I begin to ponder,
What becomes of them when I wake?
Rowing gently on the silken lake,
Oars dip as does our ship but only rocking, never stopping,
Wood creaking should our ship be leaking we could go on weeping,
But our eyes are swollen from long lies
And many a stolen hearts beat by the marching of forgotten woes,
Our boat floats merrily down with the flow,
The tide is low, but a sound ever does slightly grow,
Our heads up go, from where comes this roar?
We crawl to the edge and see beyond: a ledge,
A God among ledges, a king among edges, from this rocky fall we are doomed to soar,
To the oars we sprawl, we grunt alone, trying to win but we won’t,
Survive the fall down the cliff, swiftly down the roaring waterfall,
This crash won’t be my last as the dawn is far still but nigh and the night is barely done,
For now I go back, sound asleep,
Into quiet darkness deep,
Back to that lake where it all began,
Doomed to fall over and over again



Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 29 comments.


on Jun. 28 2013 at 5:22 pm
chronosun BRONZE, Movingsomewherenew, Illinois
3 articles 0 photos 22 comments
Imagery is important in a dream. Even the blind see when they sleep. Thank you Katie.

on Jun. 28 2013 at 5:21 pm
chronosun BRONZE, Movingsomewherenew, Illinois
3 articles 0 photos 22 comments
Flows like water, just what I was aiming for. Thank you newsoulpoet.

on Jun. 28 2013 at 5:20 pm
chronosun BRONZE, Movingsomewherenew, Illinois
3 articles 0 photos 22 comments
I appreciate the A plus, Shelbie  

on Jun. 28 2013 at 5:20 pm
chronosun BRONZE, Movingsomewherenew, Illinois
3 articles 0 photos 22 comments
thank you very much for your thoughts

on Jun. 28 2013 at 5:14 pm
VartikaSingh GOLD, Ghaziabad, Other
13 articles 1 photo 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
One who make success without any trouble is victory, but one who make a success with lots of trouble is History.

Dreamy poem COOOOOOOLLLLL!!!!!!

KatieP33 said...
on Jun. 28 2013 at 5:13 pm
KatieP33, Coruscant, Arizona
0 articles 5 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
feet :)

This was awesome! c: beautiful imagery and it flows super well! :)

on Jun. 28 2013 at 4:50 pm
BalladOfMonaLisa PLATINUM, Na, Other
24 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love and to be loved; to hurt and to be hurt. These are the ideals that make up humanity. ~Me (Lisa)

Wow.... this is absolutely amazing. It flows so naturally and I just love it!

on Jun. 28 2013 at 4:50 pm
Himlen--Shellie GOLD, HotSprings, Montana
11 articles 7 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A tragedy's a fairy tale with an alternate ending."

Holy shiz, the imagery is spectacular!! I really like how you structured it too. A+!! ^.^ I really think it is great

on Jun. 28 2013 at 4:49 pm
Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
17 articles 0 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
May your words be sharp.<br /> - Christopher Paolini<br /> <br /> <br /> Nobody&#039;s going to wait for you, so do it now.<br /> -Ingrid Michaelson<br /> <br /> <br /> Broken hearts heal, but never the same.<br /> - Jessica Romo<br /> <br /> Idiots rely on luck.<br /> -Sherlock Holmes

Great job, Chrono! This is an amazing poem!