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Broken

April 30, 2013
By Harri SILVER, Auburn Hills, Michigan
Harri SILVER, Auburn Hills, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 63 comments

The complete desperation that I feel inside;
I'm separated: from the world I do hide.
The hurt from these cuts, they don't cover my fears,
just leave ugly scars, a trace of my tears.

The lack of affection that I feel each day,
throws me deeper, deeper, deeper away.
A wallowing form, just a shade of what was;
but nobody cares. No one ever does.

The empty feeling I get when I'm done,
the stains I clean up from the blood that did run,
the awful realization that I'm almost gone:
I'm more alone now then I ever thought.

The superfluous blame game:
who should I pick?
Who should I say made me like this?
So many to choose from,
yet, it can only be one.
I'm to be scorned for the things that I've done.

God turned the page: my scars are just scars.
The selfishness I fought with is now behind bars.
Standing up tall, not alone, nor afraid;
I don't have to worry: I've been saved from that grave.



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Harri SILVER said...
on Feb. 28 2014 at 12:26 pm
Harri SILVER, Auburn Hills, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 63 comments
Oh, thanks again. 

on Feb. 28 2014 at 12:21 pm
Promethean SILVER, Kanpur, Other
8 articles 0 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
An eye for an eye will make the whole world blind....

:d i AM REALLY PLEASED WITH THE MEANING. 

Harri SILVER said...
on Feb. 28 2014 at 12:20 pm
Harri SILVER, Auburn Hills, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 63 comments
Thanks mate. 

on Feb. 28 2014 at 12:09 pm
Promethean SILVER, Kanpur, Other
8 articles 0 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
An eye for an eye will make the whole world blind....

Cool.  

Harri SILVER said...
on Feb. 27 2014 at 9:11 pm
Harri SILVER, Auburn Hills, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 63 comments
You are so sweet!!! Thank you, Jane!

on Feb. 27 2014 at 9:06 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 437 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

...speechless...:)

Harri SILVER said...
on Feb. 27 2014 at 5:04 pm
Harri SILVER, Auburn Hills, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 63 comments
Thank you.

Nintendude said...
on Feb. 27 2014 at 5:02 pm
DASSA GOOD ONE

Harri SILVER said...
on Feb. 26 2014 at 9:45 am
Harri SILVER, Auburn Hills, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 63 comments
It has yet to be publihsed, but thanks~ 

Harri SILVER said...
on Feb. 24 2014 at 7:51 pm
Harri SILVER, Auburn Hills, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 63 comments
Aw, thanks!

Harri SILVER said...
on Feb. 24 2014 at 7:51 pm
Harri SILVER, Auburn Hills, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 63 comments
Thank you so much!!!

on Feb. 24 2014 at 7:47 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.<br /> Khalil Gibran

I really love this...

Sail_ BRONZE said...
on Feb. 24 2014 at 5:38 pm
Sail_ BRONZE, Eugene, Oregon
3 articles 10 photos 196 comments
*Harri, my bad

Sail_ BRONZE said...
on Feb. 24 2014 at 5:37 pm
Sail_ BRONZE, Eugene, Oregon
3 articles 10 photos 196 comments
Luci, this is amazing! I really love it, and I hope you keep holding on. 

on Feb. 24 2014 at 5:08 pm
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
1 article 0 photos 274 comments

Favorite Quote:
Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

This is very good indeed, I am sorry Harri.

Harri SILVER said...
on May. 27 2013 at 9:30 am
Harri SILVER, Auburn Hills, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 63 comments
Thank you so much!

Harri SILVER said...
on May. 22 2013 at 11:48 am
Harri SILVER, Auburn Hills, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 63 comments
I did. I wrote it a few months back. 

on May. 9 2013 at 12:21 am
Oh hey girls, who wrote this? It's nice, good work. :) xx

kitchenmaid said...
on May. 5 2013 at 8:43 am
I love this poem.

Kat McGinty said...
on May. 4 2013 at 9:21 pm
Pretty good! Congratulations on being published!