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Hold On

April 22, 2013
By Breezey PLATINUM, Orange City, Iowa
Breezey PLATINUM, Orange City, Iowa
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Hold on to the memories that we created
Even if they were not the best
Hold on to the good
Even if its overshadowed by the bad
Hold on to you dreams
Even if they become faded
Hold on to your beliefs
Even if they are questioned
Hold on to my hand
Even when we have separated and grown apart


The author's comments:
True original feelings .. that i hold on to.

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on Aug. 7 2013 at 11:03 am
love.writing BRONZE, St. Clair Shores, Michigan
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I really like this poem!  It's hopeful and it seems like something that could really help a sad or lonely person. :)

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on May. 27 2013 at 2:53 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

Very sweet poem. And just hopeful. I think we all have those wantings of not wanting to be let go. Unfortunately, it doesn't always work out. But onecan wish, can't one?

on Apr. 25 2013 at 12:24 pm
Breezey PLATINUM, Orange City, Iowa
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Hello !and thank you so much for reading my poetry I'm 15 and i just started out writing ! so, please leave comments along with suggestions! i need all the help and feedback i can get!