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Someone Knows

October 23, 2012
By angel_of_silence PLATINUM, Cotulla, Texas
angel_of_silence PLATINUM, Cotulla, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
“The boy never cried again, and he never forgot what he'd learned: that to love is to destroy, and that to be loved is to be the one destroyed.” -Jace Wayland City of Bones


Behind a mask is where you hide
You say the truth but yet you’ve lied
You hide what you truly are
But you must to reach that social bar
You think you’re cool ‘cause of what you pose
But its time you learn that someone knows
You are not the person you pretend to be
But I’m the only one that can see
You say you love when you really hate
Because you’re impatient you make others wait
In your eyes is where your real self lies
And where your life is in knots and ties
You say you’re happy when you feel remorse
Or any other feeling worse
You care too much about what others say
But you don’t care enough about your way
It’s time to get out from behind your mask
Whether you’re good or bad it will be a task
You walk around like you’re all that
People wish your ego would just splat
You think you’re cool ‘cause of what you wear
But really others just don’t care
You say you know who you are
But that lie is as obvious as a star
You think that you are so great and cunning
But mostly you just feel like running
You think you’re cool ‘cause of what you pose
But is time you knew that someone knows


The author's comments:
One night I was thinking about some of the people that I know and some of them are not themselves, this is dedicated to them.

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Kindle GOLD said...
on Sep. 10 2013 at 5:26 pm
Kindle GOLD, Sudbury, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"There is no subject so old that something new cannot be said about it." -Fyodor Dostoevsky

"Forgive me my nonsense, as I also forgive the nonsense of those that think they talk sense." - Robert Frost

I can't believe I did this twice!!!! Sorry, it's supposed to be a new comment

Kindle GOLD said...
on Sep. 10 2013 at 5:20 pm
Kindle GOLD, Sudbury, Other
11 articles 0 photos 93 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is no subject so old that something new cannot be said about it." -Fyodor Dostoevsky

"Forgive me my nonsense, as I also forgive the nonsense of those that think they talk sense." - Robert Frost

It would be so cool if there was a tune to this! It was great :)  

Siesie SILVER said...
on Jun. 15 2013 at 9:44 pm
Siesie SILVER, Wheat Ridge, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"life is not fun, you have to make it that way."

wow, i love your wording. 

on Dec. 18 2012 at 11:48 am
Shadowpomgurl PLATINUM, Canton, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I was NEVER that drunk." -Johnny Depp as Jack Sparrow

good poem! i = lovin it!!! so tru, and i think about this topic alot. great work. :)

on Nov. 26 2012 at 4:45 pm
angel_of_silence PLATINUM, Cotulla, Texas
24 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
“The boy never cried again, and he never forgot what he'd learned: that to love is to destroy, and that to be loved is to be the one destroyed.” -Jace Wayland City of Bones

its means that even though they said something they are lying to themselves

on Nov. 23 2012 at 9:24 pm
Detective_Finn SILVER, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
A great day starts with the thought of having one. Joseph Dixon

It's  a good idea but it has one major contradiction that throws it off. In the beginning, you say that they tell the truth but they lie. That makes no sense to me and throw s the poem off. Other than that, it is good.