Heartbroken | Teen Ink


February 22, 2012
Lovejuice GOLD,
19 articles 0 photos 55 comments

You stole my heart
Made it yours, made it right.
You took it away into the night,
Took it fast, and out of sight.

I trusted it to you,
I let your gentle hands hold it tight.
You were my love, me your shining knight,
Or so it was until that fateful night...

It was awful, what you did.
You destroyed my heart,
Tore it apart.
You left me with it, in each hand a part.

I was broken, dejected,
Cast away by the love of my life.
Now my thoughts linger on the edge of a knife.

Thank you.
For protecting my precious heart.

Thank you.
For sticking with me to the very end.

Thank you.
For ruining everything.

The author's comments:
A user from the site asked me to write this for them, so here it is.

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on Jun. 6 2012 at 3:14 pm
colormenerdy GOLD, Uniontown, Ohio
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Really like this! I can feel the emotion in it. Great job (:

Lovejuice GOLD said...
on Feb. 23 2012 at 11:00 pm
Lovejuice GOLD,
19 articles 0 photos 55 comments

Thanks for the read U2.

I'm honored that another one of my poems gets to go in your famed favorites section. ^_^

on Feb. 23 2012 at 9:53 pm
U2_Fanatic GOLD, Westbury, Other
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Also going in my favorites....