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Purple tears

January 14, 2012
By chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
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chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
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At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.<br /> <br /> Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.<br /> <br /> A poem is never finished, only abandoned.<br /> <br /> Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

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Purple tears falling from my eyes,
dripping down as I fantasize
of what will never be:
that long lost dream of you and me.
WHat once were tickles
now are rashes.
What once were hugs
slowly turn to backlashes.
I'm fighting a war
I'm bound to lose.
I can no longer take
this emotional abuse.
Slowly but surely
I'm rolling down a steep hill
and no matter how far I roll,
it's against my will.
What once were laughs
now are screams,
because of this pain
you cannot cease.
My fragile heart has collapsed.
You bent me til I broke,
now I'm going mad.
Pain and sorrow fill me now
and I just want to know how
you managed to break my heart
and cause me to slowly fall apart.
I hate all this pain
and I despise
you and all of your cruel lies.
You don't deserve to
ever feel love....
You came from below
instead of above.
I don't even know why
I called you a friend...
All I know is that
this is our end.

© Adeline N., Ridgefield, CT

The author's comments:
This is just about ending a bad friendship... This is based on the same scenario as my other poem "love and death".
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chloena_garrett GOLD said...
on Jun. 18 2013 at 12:17 pm
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.<br /> <br /> Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.<br /> <br /> A poem is never finished, only abandoned.<br /> <br /> Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

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thank you for your positivity:)
chloena_garrett GOLD said...
on Mar. 8 2012 at 8:50 am
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.<br /> <br /> Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.<br /> <br /> A poem is never finished, only abandoned.<br /> <br /> Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

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ohhhhh ok !:D
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD said...
on Feb. 2 2012 at 8:50 pm
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

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Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

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:) Nope, not yet! *If it is, beside the screen name, like VIP tag, Mag will be there!
chloena_garrett GOLD said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 8:24 am
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.<br /> <br /> Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.<br /> <br /> A poem is never finished, only abandoned.<br /> <br /> Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

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Thanks. Yeah Im more into the dark genre of writing. Ive been writing poetry for about 3 1/2 years now.
Aginger GOLD said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 7:08 pm
Aginger GOLD, Bingen, Washington
11 articles 0 photos 46 comments

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&quot;Why are you so busy trying to fit in when you were born to stand out?&quot;

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Wow this is deep! And very dark..but you portrayed the emotion well, nice job! You are quite good a writing poetry!
chloena_garrett GOLD said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 8:18 am
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.<br /> <br /> Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.<br /> <br /> A poem is never finished, only abandoned.<br /> <br /> Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

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You are a really great writer. Has any of your stuff ever been in the magazine?
chloena_garrett GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 1:06 pm
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.<br /> <br /> Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.<br /> <br /> A poem is never finished, only abandoned.<br /> <br /> Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

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Awww. I wrote this 3 years ago. You are amazing, love. When I get ur links, ur getting attacked with 5/5
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 12:53 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

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The only people who don&#039;t get anywhere are the people who don&#039;t dream of a better place for themselves...

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Amazing! Been through a similar situation not too long ago... 5/5 for you dear!(:
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 7:26 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

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Thank you and I truly meant it! Keep it up!
Ella1 GOLD said...
on Jan. 27 2012 at 12:12 pm
Ella1 GOLD,
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Great title and I love your word choice!
chloena_garrett GOLD said...
on Jan. 23 2012 at 8:47 am
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.<br /> <br /> Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.<br /> <br /> A poem is never finished, only abandoned.<br /> <br /> Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

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Aww thanks. :D A lot of people don't.
chloena_garrett GOLD said...
on Jan. 23 2012 at 8:45 am
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.<br /> <br /> Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.<br /> <br /> A poem is never finished, only abandoned.<br /> <br /> Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

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Awww thanks. I love the way you describe my poetry. I'd LOVE to look at your articles.
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD said...
on Jan. 23 2012 at 1:51 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

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It is full of deep sensation! I love this piece of writing. Beautiful wording. Thumbs up! Btw, check out my articles, too.
ForeverSweetheart GOLD said...
on Jan. 22 2012 at 6:31 pm
ForeverSweetheart GOLD, Safford, Arizona
17 articles 1 photo 36 comments

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&quot;Babe, do what you have to do.&quot; -- Ryan M.<br /> &quot;I like nonsense; it wakes up the brain cells.&quot; -- Dr. Seuss<br /> &quot;Put him in the taffy puller!&quot;<br /> &quot;Taffy puller?!&quot;<br /> &quot;Hey! That was my idea!&quot; -- Charlie and the Chocolate Factory.

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This is so deep. I adore your work :)