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January 14, 2012
By chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
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chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

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At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.<br /> <br /> Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.<br /> <br /> A poem is never finished, only abandoned.<br /> <br /> Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

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I am trapped inside your love;
I am a prisoner of your heart.
You are always on my mind.
You are the inspiration to my art;
the reason I draw and paint,
the only reason I smile.
When I talk to you I feel faint.
If I even hear your name, my
heart flies to the moon and back.
The day you left my whole world died and my fragile heart cracked.
I fell so deep I drowned
in a sea of lies
that I told to hide my thoughts
and cover up my yearning cries.
If I had just one chance,
I know I could be the best.
Please take my heart once more
and put my sincerity to the test.

The author's comments:
I broke up with someone for someone else and it was the worst mistake ever. I regretted it sincerely and never got the chance to tell that person how I felt.
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This article has 11 comments.

XCBVIA GOLD said...
on Sep. 13 2013 at 9:12 pm
XCBVIA GOLD, Delaware, Ohio
14 articles 1 photo 28 comments

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NGU. Never give up.

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Btw, i don't know if i answered your question in another of your work's comments but yes i do like Edgar Allen Poe. And you should know who i am by now and you have flourished quite considerably since i left and that is so awesome! i'm glad for you! anyways, talk to you later! :D
chloena_garrett GOLD said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 8:16 am
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.<br /> <br /> Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.<br /> <br /> A poem is never finished, only abandoned.<br /> <br /> Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

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thanks. In the poem, I just sort of come to a state of realizing, "hey, I screwed up. I need you back", and i put it into stanzas. That is basically how I write ALL my poems. Based off real situations.
chloena_garrett GOLD said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 8:15 am
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.<br /> <br /> Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.<br /> <br /> A poem is never finished, only abandoned.<br /> <br /> Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

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Lol. Thanks. You're sweet. I write poetry, short stories, novels, and everything else. :P i cant wait to check out your page.
tealbird said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 5:30 pm
I'm always a little bit jealous of those who can succeed in writing poetry (I'm much more of a short story person--poetry is too hard for me), and you, my friend, have added to that. (In a wonderful way of course!) This is great.
JOKelly BRONZE said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 2:45 pm
JOKelly BRONZE, Caro, Michigan
4 articles 0 photos 5 comments

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&quot;Never more&quot; ...Poe the raven

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I like the emotion. I think your puntuation is great!
chloena_garrett GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 1:04 pm
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.<br /> <br /> Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.<br /> <br /> A poem is never finished, only abandoned.<br /> <br /> Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

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thank you! :D
lucybrown SILVER said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 12:57 pm
lucybrown SILVER, Blacksburg, Virginia
7 articles 0 photos 112 comments

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The wastebasket is a writer&#039;s best friend. ~Isaac Bashevis Singer <br /> <br /> First things first, but not necessarily in that order. ~ From Doctor Who

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This is really good. It has so much emotion and I like the rhythm to it. Nice job!
chloena_garrett GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 12:46 pm
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.<br /> <br /> Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.<br /> <br /> A poem is never finished, only abandoned.<br /> <br /> Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

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Thank you :D I loved your poem too :D
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 12:36 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

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The only people who don&#039;t get anywhere are the people who don&#039;t dream of a better place for themselves...

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Freaking beautiful! I know exactly where tire coming from! 5/5
chloena_garrett GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 11:27 am
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.<br /> <br /> Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.<br /> <br /> A poem is never finished, only abandoned.<br /> <br /> Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

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Thank you :D I didn't quite like this one very much. It's definitely not my best by far.
brainiac SILVER said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 11:24 am
brainiac SILVER, Grove City, Ohio
8 articles 1 photo 26 comments

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Time keeps on slipping, slipping, slipping into the future.

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Nice, very intense.