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The cottage

December 1, 2011
By artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
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the place where I go desperately and anxiously
The place where I walk oddly and shoeless
Because my toes feel uncomfortable
when they feel the cold floor

The place where I violently and abruptly release my insanity, my craziness,my twisted unknown artistry

Where my hair raises up
because of the goosebumps
Because of my frosty,twisted and dark imagination

It's the place where I wake up at 2 am to write what the sleepy morning whispers me

This place is mine
This place is my precious
It's my well preserved iron trunk

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artmantist BRONZE said...
on Dec. 17 2012 at 3:15 pm
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
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i'm glad u lik it. I ll check urs too !!
so_joy SILVER said...
on Dec. 12 2012 at 12:29 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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So powerful! I LOVE this! Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! It would mean a lot:) Thanks!
artmantist BRONZE said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 8:52 pm
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
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tnx,glad u like it
Skyeblu BRONZE said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 8:23 pm
Skyeblu BRONZE, Lawton, Oklahoma
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&quot;You are you. Now, isn&#039;t that pleasant?&quot;<br /> -Dr.Seuss<br /> &quot;I was going to buy a copy of &quot;The Power of Positive Thinking&quot;, and then I thought: What the hell good would that do?&quot;<br /> -Ronnie Shakes

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I like it its light and heavy all at the same time if that makes sense lol I'm looking forward to more of your poems:)
artmantist BRONZE said...
on Jan. 24 2012 at 9:32 pm
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
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tnx, daph, really appreciate it
daph199 SILVER said...
on Jan. 24 2012 at 8:59 pm
daph199 SILVER, Burlington, New Jersey
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It reminds me of a little kid sneaking away to a clubhouse. I get a sort of "cute" feel from it, although that may seem like a weird response lol. it's nice and light :)
artmantist BRONZE said...
on Jan. 13 2012 at 9:43 pm
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tnx for the comment, nick
artmantist BRONZE said...
on Jan. 13 2012 at 9:42 pm
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tnx, broke,sure u will c more
Nick-M SILVER said...
on Jan. 13 2012 at 6:42 pm
Nick-M SILVER, Oak Park, Illinois
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It was really nice-- felt kind of vulnerability in the (or your) character with it. Very cool!
schristensen said...
on Jan. 10 2012 at 6:55 pm
schristensen, Coden, Alabama
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i hope to c more as well
artmantist BRONZE said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 10:18 pm
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
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tnx, ijustwannabemelovee
artmantist BRONZE said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 10:17 pm
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
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tnx romancer
romancer2 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 9:57 pm
romancer2 BRONZE, Atkinson, Nebraska
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Awesome!! Loved it!
Sprinkle.The.World.With.Glitter said...
on Dec. 28 2011 at 8:57 pm
Sprinkle.The.World.With.Glitter, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Nice! I Love It!
artmantist BRONZE said...
on Dec. 21 2011 at 8:54 am
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
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tnx, goddess17
NightGoddess17 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 21 2011 at 8:18 am
NightGoddess17 PLATINUM, New City, New York
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Great job artmantist!! Favorite line: the whole thing!! great job!!!
Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 19 2011 at 11:31 am
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
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this is good ... keep of the good work
artmantist BRONZE said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 10:14 pm
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
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tnk u very much,glad u like it
Plain-Jane ELITE said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 10:11 pm
Plain-Jane ELITE, Grandview, Missouri
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&quot;And the Lamb at the center of the throne will be their Shepherd. He will guide them to springs of living water; and God will wipe away every tear from their eyes.&quot; Revelation 7:17

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I love the line that says "It's the place I wake up at 2 am to write what the sleepy morning whispers me". it makes me love the cottage!
artmantist BRONZE said...
on Dec. 14 2011 at 1:44 pm
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tnk u very much