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The Truth About Forever Goodbyes

November 14, 2011
By Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
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Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 185 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel my pain
Just smile back"-Eminem

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A sad embrace filled with warm sorrow,
Happiness today leads to a grim tomorrow.
Falling, rising, diving while soaring,
Sailing for hours while tied to the mooring,
Unexplainable bliss, then hit by a near miss
It’s hard to believe that anyone can handle this
Now two lives are stuck, glued apart
Tied separate by what’s in the heart
All the riches of the world are nothing
Having all of them wouldn’t mean anything
The same, now, life will never seem,
As a pillow is met by a hot, salty rain.

© Amanda L., Cumberland, MD

The author's comments:
This is about the day I had to say goodbye to a friend I spent a week with at this summer camp type thing put on by the Civil Air Patrol (the civilian branch of the Air Force). I've written several poems about this, probably because I got pretty close to her, and she lives hundreds of miles away.
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This article has 16 comments.

Tiggerlily14 said...
on Dec. 5 2011 at 2:39 pm
woah, I almost missed commenting on this one  :P  well I commented, good bye
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD said...
on Dec. 5 2011 at 10:39 am
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 185 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel my pain
Just smile back"-Eminem

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250 views, and still 5 stars.  Thanks for all of the rating and commenting!
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 5:26 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 185 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel my pain
Just smile back"-Eminem

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Thanks, it's probably my most personaly poem.
sunshine7223 SILVER said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 5:23 pm
sunshine7223 SILVER, Holdenville, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"Afterall, a loose screw doesn't want to need, and a hammer doesn't want to be needed." -Me

"Those who observe with their eyes closed and mouths open, are usually not as wise as those who allow their minds to wander freely." -Me

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This is my favorite poem of yours! So deep! I LOVE it! I can so relate to it too! :)
Tiggerlily14 said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 4:52 pm
send it to me  =D
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 3:58 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 185 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel my pain
Just smile back"-Eminem

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Thanks. :)
laxgirl9 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 2:34 pm
laxgirl9 BRONZE, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Beautiful love the metaphoric ending
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 1:16 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 185 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel my pain
Just smile back"-Eminem

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Thanks.  :)  I just made a slide presentaion using this poem.  I can email it to anyone who wants it.
EndlessSilenceOfMidnightDeath PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 1:14 pm
EndlessSilenceOfMidnightDeath PLATINUM, Baker, Florida
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I love it.
Christmas! <3 said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 5:48 pm
a little excited?......  :P
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 4:22 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 185 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel my pain
Just smile back"-Eminem

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YES!!!  Finally 100 views, and still 5 stars.  Thanks, guys!
samwich7 said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 4:13 pm
samwich7, No, New York
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love, love, LOVE
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 4:09 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 185 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel my pain
Just smile back"-Eminem

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Thanks. :)  This poem means the most to me, out of all my work.
jcrisp BRONZE said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 3:45 pm
jcrisp BRONZE, Sutton Valence, Other
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agreed!   :)
AnimaCordis GOLD said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 3:35 pm
AnimaCordis GOLD, London, Other
13 articles 0 photos 131 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Evil is when the good do nothing"

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... that was epic, what an ending
Tiggerlily14 said...
on Nov. 21 2011 at 9:00 am
I know what it is like to have your best friend living hundreds of miles away, but mine is thousands   :(