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A Kiss So Sweet, It's Deadly.

April 5, 2011
By AshleeMarie BRONZE, Gilbert, Arizona
AshleeMarie BRONZE, Gilbert, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
Beauty of whatever kind, in its supreme development, invariably excites the sensitive soul to tears.
-Edgar Allan Poe


A three letter



Also three letters,

A much more suitable

Word for the male kind.

They play their games,

Breaking hearts of

Each and every female.

A silent vow,

A promise to myself

And all woman kind,

No man shall ever treat

A woman in such

A way ever



A kiss,


So very simple,



A gesture filled

With a passion

Oh so wild.

An intoxication so


How was the poor

Fool to know

It’s a lethal


It’s the passion that

Draws him in,

Or possibly it’s that

Fanatical grip

That has him seduced?

No matter the reason,

I have him

Right where I want him;

Pleading for the

Taste of my lips.

Who am I to deny

Such a desire?

With murderous lips,

I whisper goodbye,

Sealing it with

One last kiss.

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This article has 9 comments.

Fizza SILVER said...
on Jul. 19 2011 at 11:54 am
Fizza SILVER, Raipur, Other
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right said, men r more than pigs

on Jul. 1 2011 at 4:30 pm
track4life BRONZE, Ithaca, New York
3 articles 2 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
They can because they think they can!

i really love this... good job!

on Jul. 1 2011 at 12:13 pm
SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Some truths best left unspoken.

I think it's a good poem from a litterairy standpoint.  But I have to disagree with the concept.  Men in the megority are no worse than us.  besides, some of them, believe it or not, are not romantic natured.

on Jul. 1 2011 at 1:04 am
MarleneIdalis BRONZE, Dallas Texas, Texas
1 article 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"you have to WANT to move on." -Chris Raygoza (:

i love the choppiness too :D

-MiMi- BRONZE said...
on Jun. 30 2011 at 4:52 pm
-MiMi- BRONZE, Borger, Texas
1 article 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
When the world says give up, hope say try again,

Wow..... That's all I can say is wow.....

Catiebugg GOLD said...
on Jun. 30 2011 at 10:41 am
Catiebugg GOLD, Plainwell, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You can kill the dreamer, but not the dream.
I am not crazy, my reality is just different than yours.
True love stories never have an ending.

This is an amazing piece of work.

on Jun. 29 2011 at 10:37 pm
paperandpen SILVER, Hutchinson, Minnesota
7 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Men go abroad to wonder at the heights of mountains, at the huge waves of the sea, at the long courses of the rivers, at the vast compass of the ocean, at the circular motions of the stars, and they pass by themselves without wondering. St. Augustine

i love how you write so choppy with this. it works great but it also flows too!:) so good:)

on Jun. 29 2011 at 6:04 pm
Little-Irish-Girl SILVER, Muskego, Wisconsin
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OOOOOOOOH!!! very mysterious and intriguing. Good Job. I love it.

on Jun. 29 2011 at 1:13 pm
insearchofsoni BRONZE, St.John&#39s, Florida
3 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"For you, a thousand times over."

Awesome ^o^