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"This is Just to Say"

May 1, 2011
By Keith Durkin BRONZE, Cave Creek, Arizona
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Keith Durkin BRONZE, Cave Creek, Arizona
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I have taken
Your wallet
By force,
In the alley

And Which
You probably
Needed,
To get home.

Forgive me,
It was
So temting
And so filled,
With riches.

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thezebrasgray PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 6 2011 at 11:45 am
thezebrasgray PLATINUM, Taylorsville, Utah
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very good! it just doesn't seem as if there's a strong enough ending. it's like there's no closure. you end by talking about the temptation, but not your realization that it was wrong, which would most likely end it a little better. still four stars though!