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Overlooked

July 20, 2010
By KatB14 SILVER, Chesapeake, Virginia
KatB14 SILVER, Chesapeake, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;You don&#039;t always get the waterfall short-cut in Mario-Kart. That&#039;s life.&quot;-I.P.<br /> <br /> &quot;Doubt thou the stars are fire; Doubt that the sun doth move; Doubt truth to be a liar; But never doubt I love.&quot; -Hamlet


We're good most of the time,
Best friends usually.
But you have some days
Where you won't talk to me.
I don't know why
You won't let me hold you
And make you smile,
Make your heart renew.
When you're unhappy,
My heart does tear.
You might think I'm sappy,
But i really do care.



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on Dec. 15 2011 at 6:43 pm
Karles_Ivy PLATINUM, Sunnyside, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Sometimes the bully isn&rsquo;t the captain of the cheerleaders or the girl who for some reason has it out for only you; sometimes the worst bully of them all is you.- Karles_Ivy

This poem opened my mind a bit. It was like I could see my best friend as I was reading this, looking at me the same way you wrote about your best friend. After reading this I think I need to cutt her some slack. Great job by the way.! You always have really great poems.

on Aug. 17 2010 at 7:58 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker<br /> We cannot change the cards we&#039;re dealt just how we play the hand<br /> Experience is what you get when you didn&#039;t get what you wanted<br /> It&#039;s pretty easy to be smart when you&#039;re parroting smart people<br /> -Randy Pausch

Awww. That was really sweet, I can relate.  You expressed the feelings of a best friend very poetically.