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CaN YoU sEE mE?

May 11, 2010
By MacarenaM BRONZE, Atlanta, Georgia
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MacarenaM BRONZE, Atlanta, Georgia
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&quot;Love is just a word until someone gives it meaning&quot;<br /> &quot;Momento Mori&quot; - &quot;Momento Vivi&quot;<br /> Life isn&#039;t worth living for, unless you have something worth dying for.<br /> Those who criticize our generation forget who raised it.

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Can you see me? NO.
Can you hear me? NO.
Can you feel me? NO.

I feel alone, I feel cold, I feel empty
I hate this endless feeling of pain
I hate not having a simple place
I hate being there but never being seen
I feel sad, like crying over and over
but I can't. I'm NUMB AND BROKEN.

Can you see my weakness? NO.
Can you see my pain? NO.
Can you see my emotions? NO.

I'm left alone, cold, and empty in pain
Can you see me?

© Jennifer H., Bethesda, MD

The author's comments:
i wrote this while watching ghost whisperer. it must hurt to know that you're there but invisible...either alive or dead it hurts to be ignored...look around..can you see me?
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