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In your eyes

January 5, 2010
By ephemeral_dream GOLD, Easterton Sands, Other
ephemeral_dream GOLD, Easterton Sands, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"you know that place between asleep and awake, the place where you can still remember dreaming? thats where i love you peter pan, thats where i'll be waiting" Tinkerbell

Thoughts are spoken, minds are read
Promises broken, prayers are said
Heaven dances, souls are searched
Admiring glances, tears are lurched

Angel; only in your eyes

Memories spinning, lies are told
Truths discovered, stories unfold
Waiting silenced, dreams come true
Hopes are wished for, fears are new.

Moonlight sparkles enchanting the night
Dew drops capture the essence of light
Each silvery strand, an enemy’s nest
Angel, it’s your eyes, in yours eyes it’s set

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on Feb. 2 2010 at 6:46 pm
SwordGirl SILVER, Apex, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"You have enemies? Good. That means you've stood up for something, sometime in your life."

-- Winston Chuchill

Wow! It's great! You did a great job of keeping the rhythm!

on Jan. 27 2010 at 12:39 pm
MessOfADreamer PLATINUM, North Tonawanda, New York
22 articles 2 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I write for the same reason I breathe -- because if I didn't, I would die." -Isaac Asimov

This was EXTREMELY well-written, I enjoyed reading it very much. I especially liked the line "Dew drops capture the essence of light", it just seemed like pretty strong imagery, and the overall poem was just amazing. :D

LaylaViolet said...
on Jan. 25 2010 at 4:02 pm
I totally loved the rythym (i can never spell it). It felt awesome just reading it. I don't get the idea (i'm a total novice when it comes to poetry) but I still really liked this poem. One of the best of I've seen; I hope it goes in the mag. A+

Oh, and please read my stuff too. I got a few poems, but they're kinda sucky compared to yours. :P

Skeezics GOLD said...
on Jan. 20 2010 at 2:50 pm
Skeezics GOLD, Eatonville, Washington
12 articles 0 photos 87 comments

Favorite Quote:
A childs voice, however honest and true, is meaningless to those who have forgotten how to listen.
Everyone faces obsticals. What defines you is how you overcome them. -J.R. Celski

Wow this is one of the best poems that i have ever read. It is amazing.