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December 5, 2009
By jessi GOLD, Nunya, Florida
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jessi GOLD, Nunya, Florida
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"When injustice becomes law, rebellion becomes duty."

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I wish to go o'er the sea again
o'er the sea and shore
back to where I once found you
standing at your door.

my love, you said you'd wait forever
forever, and a day
that was true until I left,
I left and went away

I came back in a year
went back up to my love's door
but where you once stood,
now a man trod upon that floor.

I wished to go o'er the sea again
o'er the sea to that shore
that shore where I once found you
but my love won’t be there anymore

© Michelle W., Ada, MI

The author's comments:
i was couldnt sleep one night, and when i was trying to sleep on hte couch, part of this popped in my head. so i wrote a poem, deleted all of it, and then wrote this. :) feedback would be awesome, because i know its not that good!
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jennee21_ann GOLD said...
on May. 4 2011 at 5:30 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Don&#039;t gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold.&quot; <br /> <br /> &quot;You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer.&quot;

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wow!! i kinda don't know what to say now. that was amazing! i like how the poem took you on a sort of journey. plus there's a lot of truth and emotion you portrayed easily in this :) 5 stars all the way! :) wouldy you mind commenting on some of my newer work? i'd love some feedback. keep writing :)
East17 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 13 2011 at 12:33 pm
East17 BRONZE, Brunswick, Maine
3 articles 1 photo 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
love is like bubbles, it makes me smile<br /> -double bubble boy XD

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this is amazing! keep it up

would you mind looking at some of my writing i'd appreciate it :D

jessi GOLD said...
on Apr. 6 2010 at 1:34 pm
jessi GOLD, Nunya, Florida
15 articles 4 photos 115 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;When injustice becomes law, rebellion becomes duty.&quot;

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aww! thanks! :)
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 7:07 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

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awwwwww I loved it:)
jessi GOLD said...
on Feb. 15 2010 at 12:33 pm
jessi GOLD, Nunya, Florida
15 articles 4 photos 115 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;When injustice becomes law, rebellion becomes duty.&quot;

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thank you!
BrittanyHale SILVER said...
on Feb. 14 2010 at 4:54 pm
BrittanyHale SILVER, Orlando, Florida
6 articles 1 photo 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
A Kiss is a lovely trick,designed by nature to stop word when speech becomes superflous.

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When another person reads it Theyll love it as much as I do.Ahmazing...
jessi GOLD said...
on Jan. 21 2010 at 3:36 pm
jessi GOLD, Nunya, Florida
15 articles 4 photos 115 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;When injustice becomes law, rebellion becomes duty.&quot;

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wow thanks! glad someone likes it =)
kheart SILVER said...
on Jan. 13 2010 at 7:07 pm
kheart SILVER, Union Grove, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Every second is countless. Every minute is different. When you came around.&quot; -kheart

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This is an awesome poem! I really love it! It is on my favorite poetry list! Thanks for the comment on mine!