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I Miss You

November 30, 2009
By GOlacieGO GOLD, Lawrenceburg, Indiana
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GOlacieGO GOLD, Lawrenceburg, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"I want a life that sizzles and pops and makes me laugh out loud. I want my everyday to make God belly laugh, glad that he gave life to someone who loves the gift, who will use it up and wring it out and drag it around like a favorite sweater." -SN

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I miss the way you looked at me,
the way you held my hand.
I miss the way you talked to me,
the way you would understand.
I miss that cute face of yours,
the way you smiled so sweet.
I missed the way you would call me up,
your name on the caller-ID.
I miss everything about it,
the caring things you would do.
I miss everything we had,
but what I really miss is you.

© Xiao H., Naperville, IL

The author's comments:
I wrote this in 4th grade. I wonder who I was talking about.
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SarClark BRONZE said...
on Jun. 8 2010 at 6:03 pm
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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This is totally how I felt, in fourth grade, lol :)

Except for the part about holding hands and calling. Very interesting poem, I love it. Especially because it's SUPER relatable for me, almost uncannily. :)