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Is It You? MAG

By Anonymous

   i walk next to you

hoping and waiting

for your hand

to close around mine

but it never does

is it you?

i sit close to you

talking and believing

that you are listening

i wait

but you don't respond

is it you?

i stand beside you

wanting and wishing

for your arms

to hold me in your warm embrace

but they never do

is it you?

i now face you

needing and trying

to make you understand

that i love you

but this you cannot see

is it you?

or is it me?





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EmmaRo GOLD said...
on Apr. 7 2011 at 9:26 am
EmmaRo GOLD, Cincinnati, Ohio
12 articles 10 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"You must stay drunk on writing so reality cannot destroy you." -Ray Bradbury

I really like your structure and the way it flows so seamlessly. Beautifully written!

on May. 28 2010 at 5:54 pm
starlight26 GOLD, Miramar, Florida
11 articles 7 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
*life isnt about pretending to be something you&#039;re not. It about being who you are and finding someone <br /> who loves every bit of it.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Life&#039;s tradegy is that we get old too soon and wise too late&quot;

I liked it. vERY beautiful.  I agree torigurl. Check out some of my work if you can. Thanks:)

on May. 28 2010 at 10:27 am
tori-gurl PLATINUM, Norwich, New York
32 articles 0 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
smile through everything no matter how bad it gets because it could be worse and if it gets worse well then it can only get better. :)

aw :( i like it its just....sadish i sorry 4 whatevr ur goin thru