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dancing in the rain

August 28, 2009
By amberlynn.zero PLATINUM, Pleasant Valley, Iowa
amberlynn.zero PLATINUM, Pleasant Valley, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
i admire darkness, its so pretty,
i wish i could be pretty like that...

im dancing in the rain
secretly im crying
everyone thinks im happy
but tuely im dieing

i know im not pretty
nor skinny or smart
my mind on the inside
is secretly falling apart

im happy and in love
yet for some reason im not whole
theres something inside me missing
something i know i cant controll

i smile because i know
that some day ill be free
free from all this hurt
and unknown misery

so untill then ill just dance
ill just dance around in the rain
untill that day comes
and im free from all the pain

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on Jan. 3 2010 at 8:21 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

this is my favorite of yours so far. wow, what to say...? first off, this is extremely deep. i can almost feel ALL the emotion. and it's so emotional and depressing, yet it shows the glimmer of hope at the end :) the flow and rhyming is amazing. this is just a perfect poem. love love LOVE it! :) 5 stars all the way. im amazed.