Eternity | Teen Ink


September 1, 2009
By jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

It was at that place by the sea,
that I met him and he met me.
And the sun always shone on the sand
as we ran together hand in hand.

It was at that place by the sea
that I left him and he left me.
Because we were meant to sail away
until we would meet again someday

It was at that time when I missed the sea
that I thought of him and he thought of me.
And I closed my eyes and saw the time
when I was his and he was mine.

It was at that second when I smelled the sea
that I missed him and he missed me.
Because even though we were miles apart
I could always feel him in my heart.

It was at that minute when I heard the sea
that I longed for him and he longed for me.
So I fell to the ground and gravely cried
that we would end up side by side.

It was at that time when I saw the sea
that I called for him and he called for me.
So I set out on my quest to find
my lover I had left behind.

It was at that place by the sea
that I saw him and he saw me.
And when I was finally in his hold,
all our love began to unfold.

It was at that place by the sea
that I loved him and he loved me.
Our love was pure, our heart was one
and we lived together in the land of the sun.

It was at that place by the sea
that we had met our destiny.
And together we lived on happily
loving each other for eternity.

The author's comments:
This piece actually isn't written about any particular guy in my life. I wrote it to express how it feels to leave someone behind, then the feelings of being reunited. Enjoy :) oh and please comment

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on Sep. 12 2009 at 10:00 am
KDtheGhostwriter GOLD, Jefferson City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"You are not special; And I am no hero."

First of all, thanks for the comments. I appreciate your feedback! As for this poem, it's beautiful! Perfect word choice; perfect imagery; perfect title! Good job all around!

on Sep. 10 2009 at 5:20 pm PLATINUM, Pleasant Valley, Iowa
29 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
i admire darkness, its so pretty,
i wish i could be pretty like that...

wow......that reminds me of a book.not any book in particular just somthing out of a story  if you know  what i mean... that was really good. while reading that i almost wish that would happen to me. not the whole leaving and missing him part but the falling in love and knowing that its right there all u have to do is reach out for it part. its a god job. <br />
o and thanx for commenting mine i thought id return the favor lol. ive got more if yur interested. <br />
keep up the good work. =))

on Sep. 7 2009 at 2:35 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
70 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

Wow.. I have chills and tears in my eyes! This is.. wow.. I'm not sure what words to use.. I began to wonder if this may have been originated from the little mermaid but u said it wasn't bout anyone in particular :) This is amazing!

on Sep. 7 2009 at 1:53 pm
Vindictive_Love BRONZE, Abq, New Mexico
1 article 5 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
Talent wins games, but teamwork and intelligence wins championships.
Michael Jordan

Whatever you do in life, will be insignificant, but it's very important that you do it.
Mahatma Ghandi

wow nice! so expressive and deep. loved it. keep it up and thx for the comments haha =)... awesome work!