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the devils not going to win...

August 21, 2009
By PLATINUM, Pleasant Valley, Iowa PLATINUM, Pleasant Valley, Iowa
29 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
i admire darkness, its so pretty,
i wish i could be pretty like that...

i almost didnt get up this morning
you see, ive been haveing some inner struggles lately
to say i dont have energy would be an understatement

i tossed and turned last night
all the "dreams" i had
when will they end?

the thoughts of cutting
the thoughts of isolation
i cant be doing this

not now
not later
not ever

i dont need to give into those things
if i gave in, i would be letting the devil win
i deserve to win....

i think its time for a walk...

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This article has 3 comments.

on Sep. 1 2009 at 7:19 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
17 articles 0 photos 568 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

very good way of defeating the temptation of the devil :) explained very well and the emotion is simply beautiful! great job :) check out some of my work and comment, i love the feedbaack. oh and keep writing please, i want more! :)

on Sep. 1 2009 at 10:56 am
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Oh yea! Don't let the fire die! I love this poem! Great Job! <3

on Aug. 28 2009 at 12:47 am
RadioShower PLATINUM, Rio Rancho, New Mexico
23 articles 5 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
Emo is imaginary - Gerard Way
Normalness leads to sadness -Phil Lester (AmazingPhil)

Never give in to sin/ the devil!!!! Good poem!!!