World | Teen Ink


August 20, 2009
By Free.The.Poison PLATINUM, Hanford, California
Free.The.Poison PLATINUM, Hanford, California
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Favorite Quote:
Even in our Darkest hour, we must always remember never to spare.

The wind is screaming through my ears,
The night covers my eyes,
Sometimes I ask myself,
Do we all try to live in fear, or scared to encourage ourselves?
But if I had the chance to, I would make a adventure,
To see the real walk away,
But I try to find the way to a open world,
One with dreams,
One with many lights up ahead to hold your every desire,
A place where everyone isn’t afraid,
Not many people want to live a boring life,
They find adrenaline,
They take drugs to feel a all new high,
There life I think,
I soon look away to see kids play, then steady on the world,
What happen to every ones innocence and what we were taught?
Often seems like it was all forgot, but soon my eyes open,
I can’t help but think, was I dreaming or awake?
I look down that dark road again,
Doesn’t seem to bad compared to the real world.

The author's comments:
Everyday life.

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on Oct. 12 2009 at 6:20 pm
LostinthisWorld.67 BRONZE, Charleston, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"You don't know what you got till it's gone."

This is really really good. I really like it. You seem to look at life a different than most people do. Most don't see life in the way you look at it. It's true in everyway. This is one of my favorites. I haven't read something like this in a while.

on Aug. 21 2009 at 6:38 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

very very true. great job on capturing the thoughts and making it into a flowing poem. i didn't think it was going to be a deep poem, but it proved me wrong. it's very good :) keep writing, i want more of your work! also check out some of my work and comment :)