redemption | Teen Ink


August 13, 2009
By alicewannabe BRONZE, Houston, Texas
alicewannabe BRONZE, Houston, Texas
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he walks the path of redemption no matter what
with the weight of the world on his shoulders
he stands alone
he hates his past but loves his future
it’s a path everyone has to take
he doesn’t know how long it will take to have a perfect soul of honesty
but he knows that things are not what they seem
to be an ordinary person with no cares or worries
he is an angel before his time
he knows what tomorrow brings
is better than today

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This article has 2 comments.

MOTW said...
on Aug. 19 2009 at 7:31 pm

Tomorrow will be better.

k boy said...
on Aug. 19 2009 at 6:33 pm
Cool- no punctuation at all!!! Similar theme as Moonlight but not so "deep", more obvious. Excellent!! Advice- write, write, write, and write some more. Your mind is working, let it flow. Looking forward to more!!