Patriotism | Teen Ink


March 26, 2009
By splatterpunk PLATINUM, Phoenix, Arizona
splatterpunk PLATINUM, Phoenix, Arizona
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I pledge alegence
To corruption
of the united states
And to burocracy
for what still stands
one nation of hell
under God
for slavery and
injustice for all

In our wars
we stand for feedom
but down in economy
we stand for slavery

Yes I pledge my alegence
To the old united states
They now stand for
and Burocracy

Freecom is slavery
War is peace
Ignerance is Wisdom
Corruption still stands

The corrupt government
still has remained
and takes our wages
so liberty and justice
no longer stands

We are a nation
under God
with no
or Morals

I pledge alegance
to the united staes
to corrupt govenment
with out the
pursuit of happiness

The people live in depresion
the government still takes
there's no justice
No freedom

Government by the people
and for the people
is the deseption

Government by the rich
for the rich
so justice lies in the grave

People for the government
government of no people
Liberty was hung in a tree

God looks down
"God bless America"
the nation of hell
were we stand for self gain

Justice six feet under
Liberty hanging in a tree
Corruption in the white house
what will stand

What will stand
what will be left
wahat will remain
of the once great nation
The United States

Freedom is slavery
War is peace
Ignerance is wisdom
patirotism will stand
corruption shall fall

The author's comments:
I wrote this a long time ago. But I added a lot more to the origanal. I apologize if you take offence to this and I apologize for all spelling errors. Thank you for taking the time to read this and would like to please ask you to leave a comment so I can contact you and read your work then give you a personal thank you. Thank you again for taking the time to read my work. please enjoy.

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Jessica(: said...
on Sep. 6 2009 at 2:21 pm
Jessica(:, Warrior, Alabama
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This is really good(:

I enjoyed reading it.

Keep writing

Zero_K DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 9 2009 at 8:18 pm
Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's no fun if you're not insane, otherwise you grow up to be an accountant." -Moi

Agreed. I think this country is turning socialist. Great job, I think I shall move to Switzerland until Obama gets kicked out.