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Eraser Smudged Heart
The pencil drawn heart,
Covered the page.
Inside she wrote,
His special name.
She showed him,
The heart.
And gave it to him,
With all her love.
He took it,
And told her the same.
But it wasnt long,
Until her heart was returned.
The eraser,
Smudged out his name,
But her heart will never be,
The same.
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