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love and night

July 7, 2009
By scotttyboy SILVER,, Ohio
scotttyboy SILVER,, Ohio
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i walk beside you
but you may not see me
the strongest among you
may not wear a crown

you're stuck in the darkness
where no one can find you
but i am the light
to help guide you out

when darkness overcomes
our last rightful hope
i will stand and fight though in the darkness we grope.

our love will defeat
the demons within us
and when that day comes
there is no retreat

The author's comments:
well heres one of the first poems i ever wrote...if u like it let me know and i'll submit some more....

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This article has 4 comments.

on Jul. 17 2009 at 5:03 pm
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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hey, i do like your poem but i sincerely hope you don't plagiarize anymore in the future. keep writing (:

on Jul. 11 2009 at 4:15 am
isnt the whole first stanza from the song "Citizen Soldier"? Even though its only one stanza, its still plagiarism...

on Jul. 10 2009 at 5:31 pm
xXFadedFlowerXx GOLD, Roy, Utah
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This is good, you are a talented writer

Anjo! SILVER said...
on Jul. 10 2009 at 4:29 am
Anjo! SILVER, Roseburg, Oregon
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This is.....FREAKING AWESOME!!! wow... i love it.