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The Sun, from Moon ft. TheRareBreed

January 10, 2022
By Afra DIAMOND, Kandy, Other
Afra DIAMOND, Kandy, Other
77 articles 7 photos 1666 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can’t ask other people to believe you and vote for you if you don’t back yourself."
-Jacinda Ardern-

"If I can make someone's day brighter, happier, better, that makes me happier."
-Ava Max-

"A writer must never be short of ideas."
-Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

"A Bridge Has Two Sides."
-Elsa- (Fictional character- Frozen)

“I knew who I was as a girl but I had to find who I was as a woman.”
-Delta Goodrem-


I beg your forgiveness, beau

Flood back to me, like a tsunami

The melodic patterns of my tears, or

is it cinder gushing from the eyes of me?

 

I drowned you in a sea of wounds, dearie

Then I did not think of the outcome I'm through 

Now, fire freely flows from my eyes, I'm sorry

The shade of this pain has only one cure; it's you

 

Our roads might have been meant to part

So did all my mirth, after your absence 

Still enamoured to you, love, wails my heart

Forgive me, for I really miss your essence

 

If I'm Winter, you're the warmth, dear

Take my hand again please, with your eyes' light

which would brighten my darkest fear 

Without you, I'm like a blackless night

 

 

And to your night I become day

because of this stay far away

you hurt me so once or twice

breaking me down with tears and lies

 

I'm sick of listening to your broken song

as you tell me we can go on

you cheating, lying, daughter of night

can go and take a peter pan flight

 

our roads divided long before you knew

I saw you drift away my moon

and not that you're gone I can finally see

You drained my essence and watched me bleed

 

so as you I shall flood back

as a wave of fury, anger and regret

fighting my demons and slaying them with pride

go home little girl, it's time for me to rise.


The author's comments:

This is my second collaboration with TheRareBreed who is a user of TeenInk. He writes really well and It's my pleasure to write with him and give him as many as thanks.

You can check him out here:- teenink.com/users/TheRareBreed

And you can check our first collaboration here:-  teenink.com/poetry/free_verse/article/1146194/The-Flip-Of-The-Heart


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Afra DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 31 at 10:09 am
Afra DIAMOND, Kandy, Other
77 articles 7 photos 1666 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can’t ask other people to believe you and vote for you if you don’t back yourself."
-Jacinda Ardern-

"If I can make someone's day brighter, happier, better, that makes me happier."
-Ava Max-

"A writer must never be short of ideas."
-Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

"A Bridge Has Two Sides."
-Elsa- (Fictional character- Frozen)

“I knew who I was as a girl but I had to find who I was as a woman.”
-Delta Goodrem-

@aalaazah1, thank you...❄❄❄

on Jan. 28 at 11:09 pm
aalaazah1 PLATINUM, Colombo, Other
32 articles 2 photos 153 comments

Favorite Quote:
where words fail music speaks
success is a journey, not a destination

when you feel your best, everybody else can feel it too - ARIANA GRANDE

If you are able to look yourself
in the mirror every day
with the decisions that you make,
that's where power starts - SELENA GOMEZ

Before you judge people judge yourself - ZAYN MALIK

haters will say what they want, but their hate will
never stop you from chasing your dream- JUSTIN BIEBER

If you follow your dreams,
it means you follow your heart.
if you do follow your heart,
I don't think you can go wrong- CELINE DION

nicely written and I enjoyed this poem... write more

Afra DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 19 at 10:45 am
Afra DIAMOND, Kandy, Other
77 articles 7 photos 1666 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can’t ask other people to believe you and vote for you if you don’t back yourself."
-Jacinda Ardern-

"If I can make someone's day brighter, happier, better, that makes me happier."
-Ava Max-

"A writer must never be short of ideas."
-Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

"A Bridge Has Two Sides."
-Elsa- (Fictional character- Frozen)

“I knew who I was as a girl but I had to find who I was as a woman.”
-Delta Goodrem-

@LolaQueen526, thank you dear...♡♡♡

on Jan. 19 at 8:37 am
CaliFranceGurl648 GOLD, San Diego, California
11 articles 1 photo 125 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I am a California girl, born and raised, so flip-flops and cutoff shorts are my go-to look."

– Meghan Markle

BTW, I like the image you've added to the submission. Makes me remember Ying Yang.

on Jan. 19 at 8:34 am
CaliFranceGurl648 GOLD, San Diego, California
11 articles 1 photo 125 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I am a California girl, born and raised, so flip-flops and cutoff shorts are my go-to look."

– Meghan Markle

@Afra, you both've written really well. Just keep up the good work, gurl.
P.S. This poem's apology part gives me tears and I literally melted. And the rejection part gave me goosebumps and chills.
The topic sounds wonderful and I appreciate your vocabulary skills.
This poem is full of literary devices and that's what I love most about it.
Happy to see this here!!!