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Moving Shape

June 1, 2009
By MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.


The fire burns the bridge I walk,
The water drowns the ground I seek,
The wind torments
the trees that stand.
And I sit on a moving shape.
Taking in all.
Some leaves join me
but fly away.
Some are cemented down.
You're one of those leaves
That I want so bad to stay.
But I can feel you
slowly drifting away.
Please don't leave me...
I want you with me.
Never blow away.


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on Aug. 25 2010 at 3:08 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
70 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

ThankYou : )  An when I originally wrote this {Has been a wile}  ..I believe the moving shape, was time

amyxu said...
on Jun. 12 2009 at 7:15 pm
Very interesting. I like the last few lines, it's such a beautiful thought. I don't really understand what the "moving shape" is, though. Maybe it's a car or a bike or time? Anyway, good job. :)