Darkness | Teen Ink


May 31, 2009
By storyofmylife PLATINUM, Mt. Olive, Alabama
storyofmylife PLATINUM, Mt. Olive, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
If life gives you lemons. Paint them green and pretend they're limes.

It whispers to me softly,
It’s voice you can not hear,
My body’s gone so numb,
As it’s drawing near,
It surrounds me from all sides, and it starts to take control,
I try fighting back, but my death is it’s toll,
Like water in the darkness,
It caresses my flesh,
Laughing at my fear, My life’s a total wreck,
It’s playing with my mind,
And causing so much hurt,
Reminding me of regrets, and sliding into my heart,
I want to get away,
But it’s almost over now,
My life is ending fast, so all I think is
“ how ?”

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on Feb. 10 2010 at 9:14 pm
WriteForLove GOLD, New Iberia, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Laugh as much as you breathe and love as long as you live."

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