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leages apart

May 14, 2009
By windswift DIAMOND, Arvada, Colorado
windswift DIAMOND, Arvada, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
let it burn, suffering teaches the soul; let it grow, love nourishes the heart.


i feel your heart beating so desperatly,

if it could im sure that it would flee,

straiter than an arrow into me,

and one would our hearts soon be,

but our hearts must remain caged,

at least until weve gone on and aged,

so we can be absolutly sure that this is it,

that in stone our author has it writ,

with no twists that would break our heart,

and nothing that would give us a false start,

but even if we were a thousand leages apart,

our love would shine like metal never to part.


The author's comments:
this poem was inspired by the one love in my life.

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on Mar. 27 2010 at 5:10 pm
windswift DIAMOND, Arvada, Colorado
80 articles 0 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
let it burn, suffering teaches the soul; let it grow, love nourishes the heart.

once more, thanks for the comment, i agree with that, but it could have flowed a little better

 


on May. 25 2009 at 9:12 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?&quot; - Mario Pei<br /> &quot;I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn&#039;t, I would die.&quot; Isaac Asimov

LOVE IT!!! This is a beautiful poem, written so well, it flows and the rhymes fit really well, absolutely amazing! You have created a masterpiece!