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May 7, 2009
By jo-jo GOLD, Hammond, Indiana
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jo-jo GOLD, Hammond, Indiana
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They cant scare me if i scare them first

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You ruin who i am inside
When you look at me
Its like you control my mind
When you beat me
You leave me gasping for air
When you ignore me
I feel like pulling my hair
When you cut me
You leave me screaming in pain
When you starve me
My hate for you gains
When you yell at me
You make me feel insecure
When you touch me
You make me feel unpure

© Andrew F., Lake In The Hills, IL

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jo-jo GOLD said...
on Apr. 23 2011 at 6:31 pm
jo-jo GOLD, Hammond, Indiana
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They cant scare me if i scare them first

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thank you very much
jo-jo GOLD said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 12:44 pm
jo-jo GOLD, Hammond, Indiana
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They cant scare me if i scare them first

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yeah actually teenink send me a letter saying my poems in a book^^
MomoSaysRawrr BRONZE said...
on May. 31 2009 at 5:37 pm
MomoSaysRawrr BRONZE, Kankakee, Illinois
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&quot;In the end, everyone&#039;s going to hurt you. You just have to find the ones worth suffering for.&quot;<br /> -Bob Marely<br /> <br /> &quot;Don&#039;t narrate... Paint! Draw! Build! CREATE!&quot; -Jack London

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<3n it!!!!!! its as beautiful as......as..... wow.
jo-jo GOLD said...
on May. 17 2009 at 7:29 pm
jo-jo GOLD, Hammond, Indiana
11 articles 0 photos 16 comments

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They cant scare me if i scare them first

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thankyou you for all your great comments.
lgbt23 SILVER said...
on May. 14 2009 at 3:35 pm
lgbt23 SILVER, Hurst, Texas
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Paris is always a good idea.

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wow, that really speaks to me. i dont really get if your speaking about a relationship or real abuse at home. but either way it makes sense. ive delt with the same things, ur writing is really good.
devils gangsta said...
on May. 14 2009 at 4:34 am
i like ur work its really good for u being a guy an all. i dont see much guys that can write poems like u. i really like ur work keep it up
Twilightnme SILVER said...
on May. 14 2009 at 12:16 am
Twilightnme SILVER, Anchorage, Alaska
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&quot;You dont know what you have until its gone&quot;

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Oh my goodness! This is so touching. I really am in love with your art. I just can't get over it! Your amazing!
FruitLoop said...
on May. 13 2009 at 11:41 pm
wow....beautiful.
Inkspired PLATINUM said...
on May. 13 2009 at 9:48 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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&quot;If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?&quot; - Mario Pei<br /> &quot;I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn&#039;t, I would die.&quot; Isaac Asimov

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OMG! That was another heart-wrenching poem, so dark and deadly sad and dark. More wonderful rhyming, it has an amazing rhythm. This should be in the magazine.