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One More Moment

May 1, 2009
By Anjo! SILVER, Roseburg, Oregon
Anjo! SILVER, Roseburg, Oregon
6 articles 0 photos 211 comments

Can I borrow your heart?
Just for a while.
So I don’t have to feel this pain,
One more moment of time.
Wishing I could dispose of this misery.
Even though I am stealing your happiness.
I don’t think I can live like this,
For one more second.
I’m sorry for my selfish soul.
Someday, I will return it.
But for now,
Let me keep yours
For just one more moment.


The author's comments:
I have no clue why i wrote this piece. I usually write when i feel like something is strongly on my heart and i need to get it on paper. But this one was different, i dont know why yet. Please tell me what you think and feel about this.

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on Jul. 18 2012 at 3:41 pm
kindlegirl GOLD, Iberia, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
signing off as usual kindlegirl

I wish I could write like this, it made me cry. Thankyou so much for that sad, but happy moment when I read this beautiful poem.Now I know I also have someones heart.THX

_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Jul. 2 2010 at 8:37 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
9 articles 7 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle<br /> - Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference<br /> -R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)<br /> -Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

holy crap compared to this my stuff looks like crap Lol. I loved it, pure awesome :D , keep writing.

btw-can you check out some of my stuff?


Anjo! SILVER said...
on Jan. 10 2010 at 9:53 pm
Anjo! SILVER, Roseburg, Oregon
6 articles 0 photos 211 comments
Thank you! wow, someone hasnt commented on any of my poems in a LOOONG time, since these are so old. Thank you

on Jan. 10 2010 at 9:51 pm
baileyadams1492 GOLD, Enid, Oklahoma
14 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
The greatest thing you&#039;ll ever learn is just to love, and be loved in return. Christian from the movie Moulin Rouge

this was really good. i liked it a lot!!!!!!!

Anjo! SILVER said...
on Sep. 11 2009 at 1:12 am
Anjo! SILVER, Roseburg, Oregon
6 articles 0 photos 211 comments
Trust me when i say that i dont show people my work.. most people dont even KNOW that i write. like maybe 5 people that know me write. but i put my stuff on here cause i dont know. its different i cant explain it. but thanks =]

on Sep. 6 2009 at 8:42 pm
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. PLATINUM, Longmont, Colorado
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It makes me sad. But in a good way, you know? Anyway, I really like it. <3

Anjo! SILVER said...
on Sep. 3 2009 at 1:57 am
Anjo! SILVER, Roseburg, Oregon
6 articles 0 photos 211 comments
Aww!! that is so nice! i am so happy that you said that. You just TOTALLY made my day. Thank you so much. =]

on Aug. 31 2009 at 4:00 pm
Aro_To_The_Heart PLATINUM, Mandeville, Louisiana
47 articles 7 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Why is it that, as a culture, we are more comfortable seeing two men holding guns than hands?<br /> <br /> -Ernest Gaines.

absolutely LOVE this poem. you've inspired me to new heights. thank you.... <3

kianapearl said...
on Jun. 17 2009 at 4:09 am
Dang, girl! you have sooo much talent; i love this poem so much! definitely one of my faves. Do us all a favor and keep writing.

on Jun. 16 2009 at 12:21 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Some things will never change&quot;---Tupac

Wow! This piece is really deep. I feel like I could relate to your pain you feel. It's really hard to get along in the world these days. One day you could be happy, but the next you're just upset and mad at the world. Keep your head up and smile. The storm will be over soon.

on May. 22 2009 at 3:48 pm
Forgotten_and_Lost GOLD, Coffeyville, Kansas
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Thanks for commenting. I like yours as well.

on May. 20 2009 at 10:42 pm
yasmin sameh BRONZE, Cairo, Other
3 articles 0 photos 1 comment
i likeeee itt aloooooottttttt...gr8 job!

on May. 20 2009 at 7:08 pm
Aro_To_The_Heart PLATINUM, Mandeville, Louisiana
47 articles 7 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Why is it that, as a culture, we are more comfortable seeing two men holding guns than hands?<br /> <br /> -Ernest Gaines.

what a powerful piece of work... it really just puts your heart out for everyone to see. like it's your blood upon the page... wonderful...

on May. 18 2009 at 3:16 pm
Quotes_on_Notebooks GOLD, Allentown, Pennsylvania
10 articles 6 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;We all die. The goal is not to live forever, the goal is to create something that will.&quot; ~Chuck Palahniuk

wow. this is really powerful, but its so beautiful!!!! i really really like it! and thank you so much for commenting on my poems! i really do appreciate it a lot. i don't show too many people my work so it's really nice to know someone likes it! haha! but keep writing because if your other pieces are like this then they must be AMAZING!

on May. 10 2009 at 11:40 pm
jennnnnnn BRONZE, Irvine, California
4 articles 6 photos 69 comments
i like it a lot, its really interesting. it makes me wonder who the 'you' is. good job!



itd be nice if you could check out my stuff too, thanks! :)

on May. 10 2009 at 6:59 pm
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
34 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching&quot; ~me ;)

I totally know what you mean when you say you have no have no idea why you wrote a certain peice. The poem is still REALLY good. No, its really REALLY good!

on May. 10 2009 at 4:08 am
blackamethyst GOLD, Centerville, Ohio
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really cool.. before i read your comments i thought you were someone who is unhappy and knows someone and is jealous of someone who is really happy. i like it and i can relate