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You're in my thoughts

April 22, 2009
By blackamethyst GOLD, Centerville, Ohio
blackamethyst GOLD, Centerville, Ohio
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was you.
Everything reminded me
of those empty spaces
you should
be in.

I walked past your car,
all our trips,
to everywhere.

Glanced at my phone,
of you, teasing,
"You type so slow!"
of that message,
the one about the

I sat in your spot on
the couch.
I walked past your
where did you go?

I glanced at the clock,
5:12 (blink) 5:12
your room number. 512.

I walked past the
look! a picture of us.
took it to my
room and
framed it,
sketched it,
cried over it.

I wonder, where you are
who you're with
if you know,
you're in my thoughts.

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on Sep. 2 2009 at 1:36 pm
firstsnowfalls DIAMOND, Marcellus, New York
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Very powerful... it is personal and emotional, but also, in a way, generic, in that so many can relate. Great job!

on Aug. 8 2009 at 11:08 pm
emo.panda101 BRONZE, Fitchburg, Massachusetts
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iam the greatest dork!!

i can relate to all your poems i love them all

on May. 11 2009 at 10:54 pm
EleanorRigby PLATINUM, New York City, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The optomist proclaims we live in the best of worlds, and the pessimist fears this is true." - James Branch Cabell

yeah the way you wrote it is so interesting. i can tell you really think about when to skip to the next line, cuz it really adds emphasis on certain words. i do the same thing. i feel like i can envision your thought process while writing this poem.

on May. 11 2009 at 8:28 pm
TJ21992 PLATINUM, Penn Yan, New York
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"No matter how fast light travels, darkness is always there first, waiting!"

Wow this is wow! I loved it and I can relate it's great. Oh yes to answer you question, yes my poem Loss Of Control is about an eating disorder, but it is also about cutting too. But yeah I love your poem, you should really get more on here it is really good.

on May. 7 2009 at 9:26 am
Kumanga DIAMOND, Bethel, Alaska
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Always Accept nd love urself for who u are!

this is really good :-)