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Double Vision

November 29, 2018
By lilyw123 BRONZE, Defiance, Ohio
lilyw123 BRONZE, Defiance, Ohio
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The writing titled “Double Vision,” written by Anthony R., talks about how his bad vision isn’t so bad. His writing left me feeling impressed and surprised. When I read “Double Vision,” it surprised me and impressed me. I thought that this was an interesting essay because he has a very positive outlook even though he is vision impaired. I definitely agree that he should have a positive outlook. He says, “My imperfect eyesight, although injury provoking at times, has allowed me to develop a unique outlook on life.” It really made me think about how I should be grateful for everything I have and even the small inconveniences that happen in life every day.  I think that this essay could have been written a bit better, when it comes to explaining why he is grateful for the eyes he has. I think he may need more examples just to explain more, and then the essay would be easier to understand.


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This piece is very interesting.


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