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The Devil's Waltz

April 12, 2009
By AshleyAnn PLATINUM, Sanford, Florida
AshleyAnn PLATINUM, Sanford, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"One day, dude, I'm just going to get off the bus and I'm gonna run into the woods and I'm never gonna come back. And when I come back, I'm gonna be the knife master."


If I Danced With the Devil
By the Light of the Moon
What Would He Demand of Me?
Perhaps A Sweet Tune?

The Ballroom is Crowded
But We’re the Only Ones Here
Around and Around We Twirl
As Midnight Draws Near

The Moon Shines Down
As Our Feet Hit the Floor
What Do I Want?
To Dart for the Door?

Maybe I’ll Stay
Maybe I’ll Go
Until Midnight Chimes
We’ll Keep This Dance Slow


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NatalieB. GOLD said...
on Apr. 26 2009 at 11:39 pm
NatalieB. GOLD, Loudon, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Make your own lines, and color outside of them.

That was a wonderfull poem, if there were academy awards for teen ink (raw) then you would win all of them! That was so, so.... Pictouresque! It was this beutifull, gothic, (not goth, BIG diffrence)and mysteriuos poem of dread and desire pulled together into a beutifull piece of work! Outstanding! Wonderfull! Standing ovation! Bravo!

on Apr. 21 2009 at 11:33 pm
xXxFallingTearsxXx GOLD, Cottonwood, Idaho
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Wow, that was a really good poem! i really liked it, and the way it rhymed. Great job!