Rain | Teen Ink


April 12, 2009
By benmagos SILVER, Escondido, California
benmagos SILVER, Escondido, California
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The rain is falling on this city.
Making what to me sounds so pretty,
She freshens my air
And dictates what I wear,
I look to the desert with pity.

The author's comments:
Haiku on Rain.

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on Aug. 19 2009 at 6:07 pm
despurlock DIAMOND, Morgantown, West Virginia
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"The heart has its reasons which reason does not know." -Pascal, Pensees, 1670

This is really great! I love it because its a piece you can read over and over again and always find something new! Keep it up! 5 stars :)

P.S. Please check out some of my work and lemme know what you think! Thanks so much! And again, great job! I'll be checking out some more of your work!

on Aug. 1 2009 at 3:19 am
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
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Loved it!!!! It was UBER awesome!!!

on Jul. 31 2009 at 5:26 pm
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
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"See in what peace a Christian can die." - Joseph Addison
"How come everyone will come to your funeral, but nobody will come see you when you are living?"

wat do u mean "i meant limerick"? also, KEEP WRITING URE AWESOME

on Jun. 9 2009 at 12:28 am
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

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on May. 18 2009 at 5:49 am
benmagos SILVER, Escondido, California
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I meant limerick. :)