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The Girl With Different Colour Eyes

March 30, 2012
By nemish23 BRONZE, Sydney, Other
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nemish23 BRONZE, Sydney, Other
2 articles 0 photos 110 comments

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&quot;The happiest people don&#039;t necessarily have the best of everything;<br /> They just make the most of everything they have.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Today is life. The only life we&#039;re sure of. Make the most of today.&quot; -CSI:NY

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There are several things in my life that aren't as I like: I don't like living in a mansion, but I do. I don't like having to put up with my mother and my brother, but I do. I don't like my eyes, and I don't know what to do about that; that is, until someone came along who changed that.

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This book has 7 comments.

EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 1 2014 at 4:50 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

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THIS WAS AMAZINGLY WRITTEN. One of my favorite favorite books of romance. Thank you for sharing this! 
nemish23 BRONZE said...
on May. 31 2012 at 1:54 am
nemish23 BRONZE, Sydney, Other
2 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The happiest people don&#039;t necessarily have the best of everything;<br /> They just make the most of everything they have.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Today is life. The only life we&#039;re sure of. Make the most of today.&quot; -CSI:NY

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I'm not quite sure whether to take the Twilight thing as a compliment... seeing how I don't really like it. But thanks!!!

I know about all the problems you said. This was one of the stories I wrote on the spur of the moment without thinking about it. I have written another one named 'More Precious Than Gold' which I reckon is a little better if you'd like to check it out! :)

But I'm glad you like it!

Cantrella PLATINUM said...
on May. 30 2012 at 2:47 am
Cantrella PLATINUM, Kamuela, Hawaii
31 articles 1 photo 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Backward, turn backward<br /> oh time in your flight,<br /> make me a child again,<br /> just for tonight.&quot; E.A. Allen

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Really sweet story, the protagonist was prickly, but likeable-something that is very hard to do. 

I had a few problems, one was that if Stacy was 15, technically she couldn't legally be married, and if her financee had tried to strip her, she could report him as a rapist. I would've liked to know more about the dad since he seemed perfectly okay with letting this happen, and how he kept the mom from reporting it as well. 

On a whole, the story was really well done so I was a little sad on how short it was. Has a bit of a Twilight feel to it as well which is fun. Keep up the good work!

nemish23 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 21 2012 at 11:46 pm
nemish23 BRONZE, Sydney, Other
2 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The happiest people don&#039;t necessarily have the best of everything;<br /> They just make the most of everything they have.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Today is life. The only life we&#039;re sure of. Make the most of today.&quot; -CSI:NY

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awwww......

thanks so much! this was one of my stories that i didn't like so much... i have some others if you want to read them! :)

<3

Light_Walker SILVER said...
on Apr. 19 2012 at 11:27 pm
Light_Walker SILVER, Lafayette, Indiana
7 articles 1 photo 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;There comes a time in our lives when we do things that we don&rsquo;t understand. We confuse ourselves, we might even logically oppose our impulses and yet we act on them anyway... There are some things that we feel that we absolutely must do. We might know that they are wrong, or pointless, or gravely punishable, and yet we do them anyway. These actions are not born of anger or emotion &ndash; we are perfectly sober. It&rsquo;s rather inexplicable. When the time comes, we can&rsquo;t stop ourselves and so we cannot blame ourselves.&rdquo; -Umasi, Truancy

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such an amazing story! you're story telling is amazing. I'm a bit jealous. :) you should keep up the good work and write more!
nemish23 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 3 2012 at 6:12 pm
nemish23 BRONZE, Sydney, Other
2 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The happiest people don&#039;t necessarily have the best of everything;<br /> They just make the most of everything they have.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Today is life. The only life we&#039;re sure of. Make the most of today.&quot; -CSI:NY

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thanks!

i know it was a little fast, but the idea kind of occurred to me and i couldn't be bothered to spend too  much time on it!

but thanks for the advice and i'll remember it for next time!

Zuccini75 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 3 2012 at 2:26 pm
Zuccini75 BRONZE, Chantilly, Virginia
1 article 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;It is better to keep your mouth shut and let people wonder, than telling them yourself.&quot;<br /> -Myself

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This is good, I would have liked it to go a bit slower - it happened in a couple of days and they were already telling each other they loved them, but other then that it was well written!