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The Honorable

February 17, 2013
By Atl.Braves03 BRONZE, Tampa, FL, Florida
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Atl.Braves03 BRONZE, Tampa, FL, Florida
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God is God and I am not<br /> I can only see a part<br /> Of this picture he&#039;s painting<br /> God is God and I am man<br /> I will never understand<br /> Because only God is God

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This is a story following a few months in the life of a 10 year old boy who lives in the Carolina mountains. Everything in his life changes when two hippies settle down causing uproar in the rural community.

Tags: FamilySelf-esteemDeath/lossCurrent events/politicsDiscriminationSpirituality/religionNatureHippiesDominic robinNic robinHonorableParodyNick robin

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This book has 11 comments.

None0 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 30 2013 at 7:47 pm
None0 BRONZE, Bellevue, Washington
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&quot;Believe in the ideal, not the idol.&quot; - Serra

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The writing on this piece is very nice. Good insight as to what the little boy is thinking, but most of it seems like just descriptions from what is happening from his point of view. There isn't really much from his opinion on what happened, except for maybe a few parts and implications.   It may just be me, but I found the plot not very too intriguing. But then again, I read/write action-centered novels, so that again may just be me.   I don't think I'm qualified to say any more on realistic fiction, so I'll stop there.
Wings10FeetTall GOLD said...
on Apr. 30 2013 at 9:11 am
Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
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May your words be sharp.<br /> - Christopher Paolini<br /> <br /> <br /> Nobody&#039;s going to wait for you, so do it now.<br /> -Ingrid Michaelson<br /> <br /> <br /> Broken hearts heal, but never the same.<br /> - Jessica Romo<br /> <br /> Idiots rely on luck.<br /> -Sherlock Holmes

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Oh, okay. I live in South Carolina and my grandparents live in North, so we go there fairly often and I think that it would be neat to go there! 
IndigoElisabeth SILVER said...
on Apr. 30 2013 at 8:26 am
IndigoElisabeth SILVER, Woodbury, New Jersey
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John 1:1

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Great job! It really flows and keeps the reader's interest. This is really good.
Zaylie PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 29 2013 at 8:39 pm
Zaylie PLATINUM, Everett, Washington
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I like it. It's well written and flows wonderfully. Keep writing.
Atl.Braves03 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 29 2013 at 8:21 pm
Atl.Braves03 BRONZE, Tampa, FL, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
God is God and I am not<br /> I can only see a part<br /> Of this picture he&#039;s painting<br /> God is God and I am man<br /> I will never understand<br /> Because only God is God

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It was in the mountains of North Carolina. I worked at a camp over the summer just a few miles from where it happened
Wings10FeetTall GOLD said...
on Apr. 29 2013 at 7:10 pm
Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
17 articles 0 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
May your words be sharp.<br /> - Christopher Paolini<br /> <br /> <br /> Nobody&#039;s going to wait for you, so do it now.<br /> -Ingrid Michaelson<br /> <br /> <br /> Broken hearts heal, but never the same.<br /> - Jessica Romo<br /> <br /> Idiots rely on luck.<br /> -Sherlock Holmes

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This was really good! I think that it would be pretty interesting to see a river get set on fire like that. Since this is a true story, do you know where it took place?
PrincessClaire BRONZE said...
on Apr. 28 2013 at 10:28 am
PrincessClaire BRONZE, Fayetteville, North Carolina
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don&#039;t do me do your hair

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Great story! I loved the way it was written, you did a great job making it sound like a real mountain story with the way the narrator spoke. I like how you based it on a true story too!
theloverofbooks SILVER said...
on Mar. 30 2013 at 4:57 pm
theloverofbooks SILVER, Valley Stream, New York
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This is great! I love the writing style, and the narrator's voice really shines through with the southern way of speaking. Your story was interesting, and it really drew me in! So well-written.
holly1999 GOLD said...
on Mar. 30 2013 at 8:55 am
holly1999 GOLD, Middlesbrough, Other
12 articles 8 photos 114 comments

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&#039;There was no need to clarify my finger snap, the implication was clear in the snap itself&#039; - Magnus Bane

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I really like this. I was hoping it would be longer it was that good, the language was brilliant too. Very well written.
kbatra SILVER said...
on Mar. 14 2013 at 7:18 am
kbatra SILVER, Needham, Massachusetts
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really like it... Keep up the good work!
Stella_Val_Illicia GOLD said...
on Feb. 26 2013 at 10:41 pm
Stella_Val_Illicia GOLD, Salt Lake City, Utah
13 articles 0 photos 247 comments

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&quot;In the beginning, the universe was created. This has made a lot of people angry and been widely regarded as a bad idea.&quot;<br /> --Douglas Adams

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This is wonderful. I found myself hoping it would be longer, because I was hooked when I started reading. I love the purposeful grammatical errors, because it gives a very worn, old, rural feel to the story like a rusty picket fence or something. It's a great story!