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snapshot.

February 20, 2010
By sophietheunicorn GOLD, Cave Creek, Arizona
sophietheunicorn GOLD, Cave Creek, Arizona
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the ocean waves come in.water laps at my toes.i smile.turning my head to you.our fingers interlace.we run.down the beach.through the water.our bare feet dig into the sand.we laugh.the sound rings out.the sun climbs across the sky.slowly.so slowly.it begins to sink into the ocean.into the horizon.my head rests against your shoulder.your eyes look into mine.smoldering.bending your head.you kiss me.this moment is perfect.a pretty snapshot.i wished this moment lasted forever.it is perfect.



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arimas SILVER said...
on May. 10 2010 at 4:47 pm
arimas SILVER, Columbia, South Carolina
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this takes a total cliché and makes it work! good job!

on Mar. 1 2010 at 3:44 pm
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

This is truly amazing!!!!! keep writing!!!!