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a life

February 15, 2010
By zoeyy SILVER, Indianola, Iowa
zoeyy SILVER, Indianola, Iowa
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free at last free at last thank God almighty free at last


Is it really far that all the little people are looked down on just because they are small? No,no one should be jujed by looks. I know a person that feals the same way. here is there story...
I'm 17 years old and all my life i have been the outsider, every day i would fear going to school. I knew that as soon as i walked in the doors of my school there would be a huge group of kids wanting to snear at me. I did not know that they could make me feel so small inside. I got in to fights and got in a lot of trouble at times. little did i know that all the pain i went through would some day help me. i learnd to stand up tall and proud. i should my self that the only person that can make me feal small is me. so today i walk the hall and pry that everyone that has ever felt this way can learn from all there pain just like me.
the person hows story this is is know a proud 17 year old hig school girl that walks the halls standing tall. That person is me.



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zoeyy SILVER said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 2:39 pm
zoeyy SILVER, Indianola, Iowa
6 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
free at last free at last thank God almighty free at last

k i'll work on it then thanks

on Feb. 24 2010 at 8:36 pm
BloodyMary PLATINUM, N/A, Other
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Life is like a box of chocolates; You never know what you are gonna get.

Stories do help! You read some stories and you learn from it and you learn their style of writing and how the subject agrees with the verb etc.

zoeyy SILVER said...
on Feb. 24 2010 at 1:09 pm
zoeyy SILVER, Indianola, Iowa
6 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
free at last free at last thank God almighty free at last

thanks. yes i know i have bad grammer and spelling and i do read alot but it dose not help

on Feb. 24 2010 at 9:13 am
BloodyMary PLATINUM, N/A, Other
22 articles 8 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is like a box of chocolates; You never know what you are gonna get.

A good article and some of the parts can totally relate to me. Your work is really good

But...

I'm going to give some constructive criticisms, OK?

Watch your spelling and try to improve your grammar.

Read more books and stories to help you improve.

:)

-Mary

zoeyy SILVER said...
on Feb. 23 2010 at 1:05 pm
zoeyy SILVER, Indianola, Iowa
6 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
free at last free at last thank God almighty free at last

what a life.