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The Difference

January 29, 2014
By VincentS BRONZE, Bayside, New York
VincentS BRONZE, Bayside, New York
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When I use the microwave and the heater on the fuse blows. Leaving me in the dark,I feel my way into my mothers room where the power box is. I open the door and flip the third blue switch from the top. Than everything goes on again like my house just came out of a coma. My friend was in a coma and neither did he or my house know about it. The only difference is when the power in my house goes on the clocks change and he wakes up with a dead girlfriend.


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R.I.P Angela <3

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on Feb. 1 2014 at 10:02 pm
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

R.I.P Angela, I do not know you, but I have lost people and people has lost people.. I will always pray for those who lost someone... I know the pain. I really loved this piece; I have never read anything like it before..

on Feb. 1 2014 at 9:51 pm
VincentS BRONZE, Bayside, New York
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thankyou!!

on Feb. 1 2014 at 9:08 pm
BringMeThePiercedSiren PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;There&#039;s nothing like a sore stomach from laughing for all the right reasons.&quot;-Perks of Being a Wallflower

this is an intriguing piece. i like how it leaves something to be said...i love how you use metaphors in this one. post more!