Hello, my name is Timmy I am 8 years old, my friends call me Tim for short and tomorrow me and my family are going to ride a brand new roller coaster called the loch ness monster, I wonder why it is called the loch ness monster I can imagine the roller coaster has water involved. I am so anxious and nervous. 

 Right now it is about time for dinner and we are going to have some pizza from pizza hut.

After we eat pizza my mom tells me to go shower and then go to bed because I apparently stink to her but to me, I can't smell anything. I shower anyway and try to sleep, but I can't because I am so anxious so I am up until I am too tired to stay awake. 

When I wake up I smell something good so I go downstairs and I can see some waffles for breakfast with some homemade syrup, I love that stuff so much, it tastes amazing. My dad tells me that we are leaving at noon because of a long car ride he says it will be about an hour and a half so he said I should bring my 3ds to play in the car. 

By the time breakfast gets cleaned up it is 11:30 so I have to hurry and get ready to go. By the time I am ready to go my parents are waiting for me in the car so I rush over to get into the car. Once we are about 25 min into our long journey I realize I forgot my 3ds but we are about ⅓ of the way there and I got this far doing nothing so I will try to just do nothing for an hour.

Once we arrive I get a look at the new ride we are going on and it is huge it is like 30 feet tall my dad corrects me and says it is about 150 feet tall. The wait for the new ride is about 1 hour and at this point, I can't just stand and do nothing for another hour so I and my mom go to ride other roller coasters like the spinning cups and the zero gravity one as my dad waits in the line, the amusement park smells like popcorn and hot chocolate. It takes forever but once my dad texts my mom that he is in the front of the line we rush over to him.

As we get on the roller coaster and sit down the bars come over us and lock down so we don't fall off of the roller coaster. Once the roller coaster is full we start moving up like an elevator and I thought that was weird but we are going up about 150 feet and going up crooked would be weird. Once we get to the top we stop and I am thinking why did we stop but then my dad pulls something from the seat of the ride it is a bolt and he says to me "where did this come from?" then we roll forward and at that point, I was so shocked I almost died. I wasn't prepared for it but as we roll forward we drop then I see we are plummeting straight down we go upside down almost I couldn't think straight. We kept going up and down like a hill after we were going up and down we went upside down and rocked to the left then the right then we were right back up and the ride was over.

As we were pulling to exit I was thinking that was really short but we were on the roller coaster for 30 seconds going relatively faster than driving in our neighborhood as we were exiting the ride I said to my dad "that was so scary let's do it again" then he says "that bolt was from home I brought it to prank you" at that point I was so mad at my dad for doing that to me. Now for the long ride back home, my idea is to just take a nap because it is quiet in the car and I am so tired. The end