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Feedback On Playing God

February 3, 2016
By Natan262 BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
Natan262 BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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Playing God is a fictional story written by Jamie's Craig. Though the story starts out as a violent piece, it quickly turns into an ironic one as he reader finds out that a lobster is being killed at Red Lobster. This tension throughout the piece leads me to love it whole heartedly.
The ironic twist at the end really made me enjoy the article at the end. "She reaches into the aquarium, grabs the lobster, and pulls it out of the tank." This sentence gave humor to the article, showing the reader that the narrator wasn't going to kill anyone all along. It let the reader have a relief as they noticed that no one was going to die. This made the piece really enjoyable.



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