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Feedback On Aww Nuts

January 6, 2016
By Natan262 BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
Natan262 BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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"Aww Nuts" is a health article about a narrator who learns that she has a peanut allergy. When she goe to her best friends Kaitlen's birthday party, she wats a peanut butter and finds that she has hives on her. This story shows how truthful a person can be and how close tragedies can be from happening.\

I personally really enjoyed this pice. It wes very emotional and very descriptive. In the article it says "in the car, my mom kept me awake by squezzing my hand and telling me stories." This imagry is very vivid and beautifully crafed.



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