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Feedback on "The Butterfly Killer" by Kay Twichell

October 7, 2015
By RockyLightwood GOLD, New York City, New York
RockyLightwood GOLD, New York City, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;You know you&#039;re in love when you can&#039;t fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams.&rdquo; <br /> ― Dr. Seuss


  The Butterfly killer by Kay Twichell is about a detective who has been on a case for a while. Just as he is close to finding who the murderer, he finds out that the killer has his beloved one. The Butterfly killer is a suspenseful piece that will have you on the edge of your seat.

   Kay Twichell did a good job on this piece. She gives great details about the story line. " Langston's body lies flat one the ground, her filleted flesh stretched evenly over thin plastic rods. They are butterfly's wings sprouting from her heart in every direction, details etched I tot he underside of her skin. Next to her head is a painting of her in profile, torso spattered with red like a copycat Jackson Pollock



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