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Feedback on "Middle School Crush"

January 28, 2015
By Claudia Iarikov SILVER, New York, New York
Claudia Iarikov SILVER, New York, New York
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  "Middle School Crush" by Abigail is a great piece about a girl's feelings on middle school crushes. She describes them as foolish and terrible and says "it feels like valentine's day has thrown up all over you." 

    I thought the piece was very relatable and funny. It described every teenage girl's boy problems. Her tone was serious but funny throughout and she wrote about two sides of having a crush. She writes about how a girl feels when your crush likes you back and when he doesn't. 



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