I found Eleanor Herton’s poem the “Sun vs. Moon” extremely undecorated as I read it a plethora of times and was not able to comprehend the seriousness of a 10 letter poem. Needless to say that the use of her word choice combining “setting sun glare” was splendid, but it wasn’t sufficient. With the significance of our sun and moon in the environment there is plentiful to say about them. The topic choice was great, but I expected a better deliver. Constructive criticism is important to better education and skills in life, so I hope not to misguide you and put you down, but to make you a better writer.