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Feedback on "Tarts"

June 9, 2012
By Alexa13 GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
Alexa13 GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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Even though Paige E's poem is somewhat short, I think she packed details fully throughout it. Her poem reflected her view on her grandmother, and the tarts that she used to serve. The format of the poem was very intriguing and unique.

From reading Paige's poem, I was able to paint a vivid picture of her grandmother in my mind. This is a hard thing for writers to get their readers to do. I truly want to commend Paige on her poem, because I really enjoyed it. I think others should read this poem to get them to relate to their loved ones, and what sets them apart from other people.



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