Freshmen
Dear Raven,

I really liked how you wrote a story about freshmen. You gave good advise. My friends in high school have advanced tremendously . Now I have nothing to worry about. I really liked how you told people to be themselves.That is a huge factor in high school. I’m thinking about taking sports also. I also liked how you wrote about yourself and your mistakes. Im very happy you learned all the right things to do in high school or I would not be writing right now. Its good to know you can be yourself. The good part is we get a tour of the school right before we go to high school, so it will be very hard to get lost. I will go by your advise and tell all my friends about how you helped me. Thank you for your advice.