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Dreaming

April 11, 2010
By Riley141 GOLD, Yale, Michigan
Riley141 GOLD, Yale, Michigan
13 articles 3 photos 145 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Always do right. This will gratifiy some people and astonish the rest." Mark Twain


Should I let my self go? Should I fall? Screaming hopelessly. I looked up, the sky a murky gray.My hands were chalk white, I shook with every breath.My chest tightened , now I could barley breath, my breath became sobs , I didn't want this, to die, suddenly, untimely. Tears streamed down my cheeks, hot against my skin. I dared myself to look down. I wanted to fight, I tired pulling myself up but it was no use. I was to high up. I thought about all the good parts of life, I tired to keep my self happy. But how could I be.My fingers were in pain. And I started to slip. NO! I can't fall. Then, I let go. And free fell into nothing. But when I hit the water, It felt like a thousand needles cutting my skin. I shivered haphazardly. I tired to swim, but the currents were strong trying to pull me back, to take me for there own. I was frozen ,the water was immensely cold.And then I saw it over head, a strange comforting light. And so I did my best to get to the top. And when I broke the top of the water I was in the luminous sunshine.

I shot strait up. Sweating, my sheets tangled at my feet. I slammed my hand at my alarm clock.It was just a dream.

To be continued....


The author's comments:
It was reeeaaly late when I wrote this so please forgive any mistakes!

P.S. Yeah it's a little corny..so what?

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Riley141 GOLD said...
on Jun. 1 2010 at 3:30 pm
Riley141 GOLD, Yale, Michigan
13 articles 3 photos 145 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Always do right. This will gratifiy some people and astonish the rest." Mark Twain

You're not supposed to...its to let the scene take place were you want not me...thanks for commenting. :)

on May. 24 2010 at 6:42 pm
This is acutly realy good...your realy discriptive .But I dont understand were the scene takes place. Overall it was good.